-=- Alwida aye December -=-

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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talent, gift, same thing.. you missed the point though.. :rolleyes:

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what point:)?

u did not like my last shair:)?

treat it as a shair :wink: … just look how balanced it was, how rythmic it was and how beautiful it sounded.. and just say “nice”, “wah”, “zabardust”, “beautiful” etc. and that will be the reward :slight_smile:

dun ever try to understand the underground meanings :frowning:

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I thought poetry meant to have some true absorbed meanings?

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by khubsoorat khoab: *
I thought poetry meant to have some true absorbed meanings?
[/QUOTE]
I always thought that too :)

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yeh kiyaa thaa :-|?

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Re: -=- Alwida aye December -=-

hmmm…
bohat se log is ghazal ko parh ker sochein ge…keh december aap keh liye acha maheena nahi tha…or aap ko pasand nahi…
par meri nazar se dekhein…
to yeh maheena aap keh poore saal ka sub se acha maheena tha..
aap ne kayee jagah is ka shukriya bhi ada kiya hai keh isne aaap ko asli chehre dikha diye…baad mein aane wale kayee dukhon se bacha liya…
kayee logon ke under se diloon ki baat
khench ker leh aaya yeh labon tak…
asliyat pe jo parda parra tha woh utha diya isne…
or saari nafratein nigaahon ke saamne le aaya…
sorry par…meri nazar se dekhein to yeh maah aap ke liye sub se acha sabit howa hai…

is ko alwida keh ker is ka shukriya ada na keren jaane pe…is keh bohat ehsan hein aap pe :slight_smile:
instead…intezaar kerein agle december ka…
jahan naye parde uthein ge…nayi asliyatein saamne aayeen gi…or nafrat kerne wale logon ko pehchana jaye ga…

issi maheene ne aap ko bohat se aane wale dukhoon se bacha keh…jaate jaate aik nayee shuroowaat ka aaghaaz kiya hai…
hum sub keh liye :slight_smile:

december ka naam sunte hi tanhayee be wafaee jese alfaaz kyuon ubharne lagte hein humaare dimaagh mein…
haan aksar yeh aapko judayee ka ghum…tanhayee ka ehsas…or ashkon ka samander de ker jaata hai …par
issi maheene mein humein aik nayee shuroowaat ka ehsas hota hai…puraane daaghon ko mitaane ki khwahish…parde uthne ki khushi…or aik naye aaghaaz ki umeed :slight_smile:

sorry par…aap apne dil mein dekho…
is ghazal mein chhupe howe allfaaz bol rahe hein keh aap dil se bohat khush ho keh yeh maheena aaya.
or shayad aap ab tak pehchaan bhi gaye ho yeh baat :slight_smile: par kaafi udaas alfaaz thhe na…to..mene socha :rolleyes: keh log is maheene ko bura na samajhein to :halo: yeah …thats wat i was trying to prove :bummer:

keh december har maheene se juda hai…
aesa koee mahena nahi…
jo humein ddheron umeedein pakra keh jata ho…nayee shuroowat ki umeed dilwa keh jata ho…or dil mein naye or anjaan raaston par naye tajarbaat…log…khushiyan or ehsas…paane ka tajassus paida ker keh jata ho…

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Oh Rani :slight_smile:

that was so beautiful .. u really understood it.. hanh:-D?

*sigh

Thanks :flower1:

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“sigh”
This is my favriot part, , it says all ,ke maye Dec. SHAHIR ke liyeh kitna acha tha . bohat khubsoorati se beyan kiya hai chote bhai ne. But as i have said before ke jo apna khal ilfazon meh bayn karne ki salheat rakhtah ho, woh bohat khushkismet insaan hotah hai,. kyon ke wo apni takhleef, dard yah kisi bhi kisam ki khushi apneh andhar nahi rakhta.

**so congratulations on writing this very nice and beutiful poem **

:flower1: :flower2: :mash:

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Bohut he khubsoorat!!! :smiley:
keep it up!:k:

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I am honoured to know that you understood exactly what was in it bajjo :slight_smile: … this was not because of me, it was because you have a heart to understand.. believe me !!!

thanks :slight_smile:

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poor december :stuck_out_tongue:

nice though :k:

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^
no, december is not poor :smiley: .. december is something which gives to others… be it lonliness or sadness or may be it is poor cuz it may take away these things from us too:)

and thanks for liking it :flower1: mera serouN khoon baRh gayaa :-p

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errrmmm OK if u say so :p

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Tikhi Jalebi~: *
errrmmm OK if u say so :p
[/QUOTE]
samajh bhee laggi :-p ??

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zabardast AQ !

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Alwida aye December
Alwida!

Khush aamdeed o ahlan wa sahlan aye January aye naye saal
Dua hai naye maah o saal karaiN gay dilo ko khushi say nehal :)

Thank you for sharing such a nice (and long too :p) poem. :)

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Thanks a alot Lamhay and WiseGuy :slight_smile:

aap dono kay comments mean a lot to me :flower1:

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AQ bhai :crying: dharien maar ke ronay wala icon, ish shoooo shadd, bro who did what to u, temme, I will shoot that person :teary1: poetry express the innerself of a person, it brings out the emotions the feelings, and here the meaning I am assuming proly could be wrong, but I think you got deeply hurt. Is it true ???

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lol.. u will shoot that person:smack:

neah.. dun shoot anyone:D

never question what’s being said in the poetry but try to feel it cuz words can never encompass the true emotions :slight_smile: … so dun ask about any truthfulness or fiction… just Believe :flower1: and thanks :slight_smile:

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ZABERDEST …bohet khoob :k:

Mujhay to yeh pooray sal ki kahani lag rehi hay…Dukhon k sath sukhon ko bhi yaad ki achi baat hay , kuch gilay aur bohet si meherbanian…aur nayai Sal k liyai dhairon umeedain …acha shagun hay :slight_smile:

aur is baat ki khooshi hay k aap ko Daagh-e-Mahtab bhaa gaya :wink:

ya shaied aap nay chandd ka asel roop khoj liya :slight_smile: