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Bari achi Gup Shup chal rahi hay, lekin meray khayal mein to achay khaasay Shair ka Post Martum kya ja raha hay ...
Hahahahah
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bas je kya karain …mere to sun he nahi rahay yeh dono … 
aap he kuch samjha dain 
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meri samajh main kuch nahi aata.. kaash koi mujh ko samjhata :$
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What I can say, but Mr. Ahmer is a very sensible person. May be today he is in jolly mod.
but medically they both are rigth. Sartan is a Viral Disease. and for that purpose Blood is necessary. There is impossible that Soul may cause by Sartan. hahahah
is liay medically ye Shair ghalat howa. ....
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** aap sab ko treatment ke ashaad zaroorat hai …
**
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yaar ap kay shair ki donon Lines kuch ghalat si hein...
1st. Rooh kay Jazbat nahi hotay ..... Phsycologically Wrong
2nd. It is impossible that SOUL Cause Sartan .... Medically Wrong
ub mein aur kya keh sakta hon... Anybody who comments plz is banday ko samjhao, kay is ka shair ghalat hay .... Plzzzzzzzzz
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**Everything Is Fair In Love , War n Poetry 
**
**aur shair bilkul sahee hai … **
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Good, your self modified quot by adding "n Poetry".
its coool, Well Done
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Thanks
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phsycologically wrong hai ar medically bhi ghalat hai 
Laikin adabi taur per sahih hai
P.S. Nice Shair :k:
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buhut khub :k:
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Thank u 4 liking it …har koi tang ker raha tha mujhay:(
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thanks prince
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mention not jee 
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**waisay tu mein samjha rahee thee sis ko .mut send karo ye shair intekhab mein…shair kum …bemaaree zayada hai iss mein…magar manee he nahin:snooty: **
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whatever 
**i like it **
lagta hai shairoon ko ab MBBS degree layne paray gee takay medically rite shair likh sakaian
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Bhoot khoob.