Aik shair

Amal · July 18, 2007, 12:41pm

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Kya baat hey tahreem. Kya zabardast collection hey :k: Koi award waghera jeetna hey kya GS sey?

tahreem_saeed · July 18, 2007, 2:37pm

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thanks Jw or main ney akeley he kiya hai deadsoul 3 reply de k aisey ghaib hoye jaisey … k sir sey seengh:D plz mind mat karna haan aap deadsoul jee

tahreem_saeed · July 18, 2007, 2:38pm

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thanks Amal jee bus aap log apni Duaon main yaad rakho yeh award he kafi hai merey leye thanks once again

rkopra · July 18, 2007, 3:13pm

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kiatabon se daleelian na lo
dil se kuch mat poochcho
zaraa dimag se socho -
agar mohabbat khudgarzi
nahin hai to kyaa hai

( Zaraa Fernando Pessoa ko bhi kabhi paro
Ghalib ki mohabbat ko zaraa ab chorro)

Amal · July 18, 2007, 3:18pm

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Fernando ko chorro, you tell me how is it khudgarzi?

rkopra · July 18, 2007, 3:34pm

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jab tak Fernanado Pessoa ko nahin parogi,
tumain ye baat samaj main nahin aayey gi

agar hum se hi sun-na chahti ho
to sulekha dot com par jaao
aur 'whitewings' ki nazmain paro
Fernando Pessoa kya kehta hai

Amal · July 18, 2007, 3:39pm

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Look carefully under my avatar to know about my gender, MADAM :D

rkopra · July 18, 2007, 3:50pm

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mujhay mauf karna -
tasweer say gender
wunder kuch patta
nahin lagta hai

isay dekh kar kuch
saaf saaf khass
se nahin lagta
yeh kyaa hai

yeh hai ab naya revision:

jab tak Fernanado Pessoa ko nahin parogay,
tumain ye baat samaj main nahin aayey gi

agar hum se hi sun-na chahtay ho
to sulekha dot com par jaao
aur 'whitewings' ki nazmain paro
Fernando Pessoa kya kehta hai

tahreem_saeed · July 18, 2007, 4:49pm

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hahhahahahhahahaha Amal jee kiya Avatar hai wow hahhaahaha

Amal · July 18, 2007, 4:53pm

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Finally, ab to kisi ko confusion nahi ho gi na :D

tahreem_saeed · July 18, 2007, 4:56pm

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plz aisey change kardein aap ka jo soft sa image tha pata nahi kahan chala gaya :D

rkopra · July 18, 2007, 5:27pm

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kya avataar hai
confusion ki to ab koee baat nahin
lakin lagata hai hawaaldaar
giriftaar karnay ko tyaar hai

Amal · July 18, 2007, 5:51pm

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At least no one would be confusing me for a female :)

tahreem_saeed · July 18, 2007, 6:00pm

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aap dono tow merey thread ko pata nahi kahan sey kahan legey koi shair post nahi keya

aashna hamay dard say hona tha
tou na milta to kisi aur say bichray hotay

Amal · July 18, 2007, 6:02pm

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Aap kaheiN to hum chaley jaatey heiN aap ke thread sey

rkopra · July 18, 2007, 6:17pm

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shair kyaa likhain
jo likhtay hain
ek dum se
delete ho jaatay hain

ab dar itna lagata hai k
giriftaari honay waali hai!

(mauf karna, Amal ji,
duniyaan ki doosri
zabaanon k shair kitnay hi
bistron aur paanion se bharay hon,
urdu k shairon main yahaan,
kisi bistray aur paani ka zikar,
bhool kar bhi nahin karoon ga)

Amal · July 18, 2007, 6:25pm

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Aap ki barri meharbaani ho gi...you know we have an atmoshpere and we have to maintain it :)

tahreem_saeed · July 19, 2007, 6:08am

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mainey aisa tow nahi kaha baki mujhey rkopra ke baat samjh nahi aati wo pata nahi kiya kehti hai k kehta hai

tahreem_saeed · July 19, 2007, 6:09am

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kon delete karta hai aap k shair batein plz

SJ · July 19, 2007, 9:17am

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Tum nay kab say apnaya iss tarhan ka ho jana
Shab ko jagtay rahna din ko thuk kay sou jana