ahem som qs

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 4:54am

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Faqeer

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 4:54am

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jis bat ka pata na ho uss mai boltay nahi hain

AQ · July 31, 2007, 4:55am

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Saail

jo Mas’ooL kaa Ism-e-Jama HaasiL hota hai…

woh Iqbal kaa sher thaa naa Jawaab-e-shikwah maiN

Hum tau maail ba karam haiN, koi SAAIL hee naheeN
Ra’h dikhlaaiaN kissaY rahrav-e-manzil hee naheeN

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 4:55am

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AQ faqeer hai?

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 4:56am

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Main ny kah tha tusi bari makholiya ho ji:D

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 4:56am

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Saail ka mtlab tu yehi hota hy:D

AQ · July 31, 2007, 4:57am

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ok, let me teach you something now

then = phir (urdu)

than = bamuqaabla

abb chooN kay chunaa chaY maiN tumhaara USTAAD bunn gayaa hooN tau abb ustaad kaa ehtraam karnaa… shabaashhhh!

aik din lag jaaye gaa hammaiN bhee pataa

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 4:57am

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saail pay mujhe ek hi sher aata hai

Shah mizaj thay saail kar k kehtay ho
saara jevan ghayal kar k kehtay ho

kachay gharray pay par utra kartay thay kuch log
saat sumandar haail kar k kehtay ho

lo 2 sher ho gaye.

AQ · July 31, 2007, 4:57am

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aap kiyaa school maiN faqeer bun jaati theeN?

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 4:58am

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Is nazm main bhi saail hy:smokin2:
Main iss shehar-e-kharabi main faqeeron ki tarha dar dar phira barson
ussay galion main sarkon per
gharon ki sard dewaron kay peechay dhondta, tanha
keh woh mill jaey tu tuhfa ussay dun apni chahat ka

tammana meri barr aai keh ikk din aik darwaza khulla or
main nay dekha woh shanas chand sa chehra
jo shadabi main gulshab tha!
main ikk shayan-e-gaddayana liay uss ki taraf lapka
tu uss nay chashm-e-bay parwa kay halkay say isharay say mujhay roka
or apni zulf ko mathay pay lehratay hooway poocha
**"kaho ay ajnabi saa’il
**gadda-e-bay sarro saamaan
tumhain kia chahiay hum say?
main kehna chahta tha…"umer guzri jiss ki chahat main
woh hi jab mill gaya tu or abb
kia chahiay muj ko!"
magar taqreer ki qoowat na thi muj main
faqat ikk lafz nikla thalabbon say kanpta, darta
jissay omeed kam thi uss kay dil main bar panay ki
“mohabbat” lafz tha mera
magar uss nay sunna"rotti"

AQ · July 31, 2007, 5:00am

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let me get it straight…

Mehbooba Pakistan maiN hai aur Mehboob saat samander paar kaY mulk maiN… aur mehboob apni mehbooba ko sohni mahivaal kaY qissaY sunaa kar goliyaaN daY rahaa hai

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 5:00am

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School main kia ab bhi practice jari o sari hy Baqol Ghalib,
Bna kr faqeeron ka ham bhys Ghalib
Tamshay ahly karam dykhty hain:)

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 5:00am

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allah kher karay

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 5:01am

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mera apna sher nahi hai jo aisay
zor zor say hans rahay ho

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 5:02am

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waqat aur haalat insan ko bohat kuch sikha dete hain

AQ · July 31, 2007, 5:02am

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goodnews:

Is nazm main bhi saail hy:smokin2:
Main iss shehar-e-kharabi main faqeeron ki tarha dar dar phira barson
ussay galion main sarkon per
gharon ki sard dewaron kay peechay dhondta, tanha
keh woh mill jaey tu tuhfa ussay dun apni chahat ka

tammana meri barr aai keh ikk din aik darwaza khulla or
main nay dekha woh shanas chand sa chehra
jo shadabi main gulshab tha!
main ikk shayan-e-gaddayana liay uss ki taraf lapka
tu uss nay chashm-e-bay parwa kay halkay say isharay say mujhay roka
or apni zulf ko mathay pay lehratay hooway poocha
"kaho ay ajnabi saa’il
gadda-e-bay sarro saamaan
tumhain kia chahiay hum say?
main kehna chahta tha…"umer guzri jiss ki chahat main
woh hi jab mill gaya tu or abb
kia chahiay muj ko!"
magar taqreer ki qoowat na thi muj main
faqat ikk lafz nikla thalabbon say kanpta, darta
jissay omeed kam thi uss kay dil main bar panay ki
“mohabbat” lafz tha mera
magar uss nay sunna"rotti"

oh yaar.. khudaa ka khauf karo

Saail kaa matlab hota hai “sawaal karnaY waalaa”

itni lambi lambi nazmoN ko dictionary kaY taur par pesh kiyaa jaa rahaa hai

aik tau tum logoN maiN koi baat samajhnaY kee salaahiyat hee naheeN hai

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 5:02am

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Kis ki

goodnews · July 31, 2007, 5:03am

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Tum main baat smjhany ki salahiat nahi hy

AQ · July 31, 2007, 5:04am

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okay correction please

it is:

Badal kar faqeeroN kaa hum bhes Ghalib

hasi ko choRaiN, tashreeh mulaahiza farmaaiye… kaisee hai :p?

Sajalina · July 31, 2007, 5:05am

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iss baat ki explanation aq hi day tau ziada behtar hai