Aey saarb hasratoN ke zara baat suntey jaana

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: Re: Aey saarb hasratoN ke zara baat suntey jaana

Many many thanx to **KhamoshNigahein, *** Vivacious *, WiseGuy, Dilsay, Jaan Lewaa, Philanthrope, Cap, Pakeeza, BrokenSky, Ullujii, Savera, SuraJ, CC and Azad. Aap logoN ki pasandeedgi ke leeye be’had shukriya:flower1:

I wonder what you found so hilarious!

Unfortunately I am not in a position to confirm or quash your fears. All I can say is wait and see - and that even if I am not here, am sure there would be many more around writing better than me. Ba'qaol shaier: **hum na hoN ge to koi humsa doosra ho ga :)**

Chalye aap ney quote kia to sahi. Warna hum to samjhey the ke aap quote karney ka ‘amal’ hi bhool chuki heiN :~)

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Nice one Amal ye really impressed me :)And a nice shair NJ:k:

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superb :k:

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ye be’rukhi ke nashtar to meiN kab se seh raha hooN
is baar tum milo to koi zakhm naya lagaana!

:k: ye kis k leay dawat naam hai :slight_smile:

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Aj kal img banaanay pe buhat zor hay tou main nay socha mein bhii ik img bana duuN :p

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
Aj kal img banaanay pe buhat zor hay tou main nay socha mein bhii ik img bana duuN :p


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bohat khubsurat img gazal ko chaar chand laga deay warna tu gazal kuch theek he thei :)

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Koyal is right Gul, you have turned a very ordinary ghazal into something very beautiful:k:…thanx indeed for your efforts:flower1::slight_smile:

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Koyal is always right haaN..:wink:

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:k:

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Yes, she is on right and left, everywhere… :rotato:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

bohat khubsurat img gazal ko chaar chand laga deay warna tu gazal kuch theek he thei :)
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Pehlay bataa detii hum khaali img hi post kar detay :-p

wesay ghazal zeyada behtar hay img banana konsa mushkil kaam hay, Poetry har aik kay bas ki baat nahin :~)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

Pehlay bataa detii hum khaali img hi post kar detay :-p

wesay ghazal zeyada behtar hay img banana konsa mushkil kaam hay, Poetry har aik kay bas ki baat nahin :~)
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wowww kia baat hia ap ki ap ne be rait main se moti chun leay like Nikami.:)

PS: Amal ki bus kia # hai ..bata dijiey help chaiye ap k leay aik gazal pakrni hai.cuz ye hamari bus main tu nahi unhi ki bus main hai..ap ki sifarish shaied kaam a jaiey ;)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

wowww kia baat hia ap ki ap ne be rait main se moti chun leay like Nikami.:)

PS: Amal ki bus kia # hai ..bata dijiey help chaiye ap k leay aik gazal pakrni hai.cuz ye hamari bus main tu nahi unhi ki bus main hai..ap ki sifarish shaied kaam a jaiey ;)
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aapko kaesay pataa keh nikami jii nay bhi :-d

No chance , aap kii baat tou phir sun lain humaari baat koi chance nahin, kyun Amal theekh kahaa na :p

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u impressed me alot:)
Zabardast:k:

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beautiful

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

aapko kaesay pataa keh nikami jii nay bhi :-d

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

aik sher ap ki likhi huwie gazloon ki nazar


ahh hum rait maiN bikhRay huwey moti chuN laiN
phir ye daR'yaa ki sikhawat be rahaY ya na rahaY

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wo aisay pata hai ;)

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Hmmmmm achaa :slight_smile:

PS: meray liye kahaan say poetry lenay gaii theen jo itni daer laga dii :rolleyes:

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I AM NEW TO THIS FORUM;

LEKIN AAP KI FAN HON ..
AAP JO BHI LIKHTAY HAIN ,,,GAZAB KA LIKHTAY HAIN..

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Re: Aey saarb hasratoN ke zara baat suntey jaana

hamesha ki tarha behtareen :k:

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:hula: :slight_smile:
boht khoobbbbbbb :k: