Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
*Yeh nazar ki gehri jheeleiN aisey na mujhpey kholo
Mujhey khwahishoN ki lehreiN ley jayeiN baha key
Main fiza meiN uRta uRta terey paas pohaNch jaooN
Aye kaash la key dey dey koi mujhko par hawaa key
*
Amazing Amal… :k:
Lovely… 
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
amal sahib ke kalam ka ek ek lafz jab ghazal ki shakal ikhteyar karta hai to har un ki ghazal ka ek ek lafz ruh tak pohanchata hai.
amal as always - love reading your work.
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
yaaar kuch yaad aa gya aakhri sheir sey. She once said that “yeh “shaier” loug achey nahien lagtey mujhey, yeh kia baat hoi key jab wo paas hey tu ussey yaqeen na dilla sakey aur jab chala gya tu poori kitaaab likh dalli” anyways, every verse is great I really needed to read something like this. Thanks Amal for sharing.
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
beautiful :k::k: zabardast ghazal hay
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
beautiful ghazal Amal :k:
keep it up… 
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
Revisiting my thread after so much of time...but big thanx goes to all of you who managed time to go through this ghazal and posted their comments. So nice ALL of you :)
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
Really but u know am always late Aymal hai na
*meiN kya karooN ke ab to khulti nahi heiN aaNkheiN
ik khuaab dey gaya hey khushbu meiN wo sajaa ke *
*Awsome hai na
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
“Awsome” hey aap ka tashreef laana…thanx for the appearance NikamiJi:~)
Re: Aey kaash la ke dey dey koi mujh ko par hawaa ke
meiN kya karooN ke ab to khulti nahi heiN aaNkheiN
ik khuaab dey gaya hey khushbu meiN wo sajaa ke
mashAllah ur poetry always amazes me..! Very Nice.