Aaj ki taaza khabar — Ladies Win...

Re: Ladies & Gentlemen ― 0|0

tumharay gham nay sekha diya mujhay har ek gham say pyar karna gham-e-jahan bhi , yaqeen janoo mizaj-e-dil par giraa'n nahi hai

ye :bobo:

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yuNhi panchi ishq, mohabbat ke naadaani kartey rehtey heiN
*jisey dar toofaan sey lagta hey wo par pheilaata hi kiuN hey!
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By: Amal
"ye"

Re: Ladies & Gentlemen ― 0|0


ye teri judaye ka gham nahi kay ye silsilay to hai roz kay
teri zaat is ka sabab nahi ,kaye din say yuhi udaas hoo'n

noon

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na jaanay kiouN hai lakin dekhnaY kee tum ko aadat hai **
**meri ye be-wajah aadat chuRa dau phir challay jaana

"Alif"

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aik duniya muntazir hai aur teri bazm main
is tarah bethay hain hum jesay kahi jana nahi

ye

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I think it should bee “noon”… the nahi that you are refering to in this one is not used in such structure of the misraa :confused:

please, check again :snooty:

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anyway, since you dun seem to be replying, I will post for both, pick the correct one, once you find it :naraz:

For “ye” (wrong in my opinion):

**yeh saaray payR poday tum bin kayee raat jaagaY haiN **
tum aakay ek baar inko sula dau phir challay jaana


“Alif”

For “noon” (correct in my understanding)

[Nai ruto’N ki chaNdni maiN
guzartay lamhoN ki ashuftagi maiN
wo saye kitnay veeran kar gaye
zindagi ki sa’atoN maiN
ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
woh insaan kitnay be-rehem niklay
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye

By: Anwaar Qureshi
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Re: Ladies & Gentlemen ― 0|0

well i really dont know about the structure .. but i did check that’s how it was written if you think its noon go ahead post something with Noon :slight_smile:

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pick as you wish :p

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Yeh ajeeb khail hai ishq ka main nay aap daikha yeh maujza
Woh jo lafz meray gumaan main thay, woh teri zabaan pay aa gaye

ye :D

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hahaha… is it a direct dialouge with me :hmmm:

khair:

Yeh Naa-pe’d Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see


BY: Anwaar Qureshi
“ye” :cb:

Re: Ladies & Gentlemen ― 0|0

lagta hai abhi abhi amad huwi hai is ki :rolleyes:

yoon bhi ho gaa ke woo mujhey dil sey bhulaa dey gaa yeh bhi ho gaa ke ussi mein ek khalaa reh jaaey gaa

alif

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*naheeN jee, kaafi puraani hai ..:slight_smile: was posted HERE](http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=242030):slight_smile: even you posted there… seems like was not worth enough to be remembered :smiley:
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Ik gulaab woh hai jo maalaaouN maiN sajtaa hai
Ik gulaab woh hai jo qabroN pe sajaayaa jaaYe

By Anwaar Qureshi
“ye” :-p

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Yun rezah rezah ho gaya khawaboN ka har mehel Main bikhri khawahisho'n kay badan Jourta rhah Bahir to saja rakhey thay khushrang aiynay Andar sey Dil ka sheeshah magar tout'ta raha

alif

aur baqi subha neno agaye :yawn:

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jan mai post ki thi kasay yaad rah jati :frowning:

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aye tasawwur-e-gul-e-zard nageeN!
TujhaY kiouN yeh malaal naheeN?
Teri zindagi tau hai luT chukee
TeraY ruNg ko abb zawaaL naheeN

By Anwaar Qureshi
"Noon"

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na to terey dard rukey kaheeN na merey zakhm bharey kabhi
sabar-o-shukar ki haalateiN na tujhey mileiN na mujhey milein

Noon:D

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:vivo: very clever :hoonh:

Nazar naY nazar ko nazar bhar kaY dekhaa
Nazar ko nazar kee nazar lag gayee

“Ye” :blush:

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:chai:

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Ye ahl-e-dard kis ki gawahee daytay hain
Wo chup bhi ho tu zamana hai humnawa uss ka