A couplet from Sindhi vaee

Koyal · May 4, 2003, 2:50pm

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 2:59pm

Cha te thee khilleen chokiree?

Koyal · May 4, 2003, 3:02pm

ab koyal ki Cha-hat maiN itni be chok’reeN na bharo hath anay wali nahi

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 3:07pm

For you:
Sohna pehnje akhiyan khe jhal
Hik kaariyoon biyo tin mein kajal
Moon te aido ta kan thiyoon amal
Sohna pehnjee akhiyan khe jhal

Translation:
Aye Khoobsurat larkee, apnee aankhon ko roko
Ek to un ka rang kaala aur ooper se un mein tum ne kajal hai dala
Mujh par to in ka buhat hee ziyada asar ho raha hai
Aye larkee, apnee aankhon ko roko

Koyal · May 4, 2003, 3:12pm

aiey larkay hum ne apni ko rooka
bohat dair taak hum ne apnay dil ko tooka:nono:

karnay se baaz na aiey
hey koi aiey aur is ko samjaiey:confused:

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 3:18pm

yeh nayan dare dare,
piyein jaam bhare bhare;)

Maan cho rokiaan? :nono:
BTW how was this shair which I translated for you Koyal?

Philanthrope · May 4, 2003, 3:23pm

Tumhara maira sangam hai
hath main hai aaise lakeer

Tumhari yaad ki aae hava
jo kay aik thandi heer lag rahi hai

Koyal · May 4, 2003, 3:26pm

ur sher was :k: sorry anay sher main tareaf karna bhool gaye singhi main nahi an ata tareaf karna

yahaN nahi raho dare dare
koyal khati nahi aam galay saray

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 3:31pm

A good attempt to translate it…thoree ghaltiaan hain but I loved ur interpretation…its cute

This wud translate exactly as under:-
Tumhara aur mera sangam hoga
Mere haath mein hai aisee lakeer

Other verse’s tranlation that u made is acceptable:)

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 3:34pm

Jab mein noon tua’ dee zuban aandee aye te tussee vee seekh lo

PS:- Aam mera pasandeeda phal hai, usko kuch na boleen :nono:

Philanthrope · May 4, 2003, 3:49pm

wow thanks… jabkay main samajh rah the ke tang toor rahi hon shaeri ki … Waise bohat khobsorat ashar hain…

Aye Khoobsurat larkee, apnee aankhon ko roko
Ek to un ka rang kaala aur ooper se un mein tum ne kajal hai dala
Mujh par to in ka buhat hee ziyada asar ho raha hai
Aye larkee, apnee aankhon ko roko

:k:

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 3:56pm

Naheen you are good at that. Pasand karne ka shukriya

Perfectionist · May 4, 2003, 4:25pm

Impressing :k:

_kashish · May 4, 2003, 4:30pm

I heard someone sang it a while ago…
very nice choice capri :k:

Capricorn · May 4, 2003, 4:36pm

Thanks :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 5, 2003, 4:07am

way way way confused:konfused:

Capricorn · May 5, 2003, 1:25pm

Anjaan tayeen ???

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 5, 2003, 1:34pm

tokree:hehe:

_Nazish · May 5, 2003, 5:31pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Na moonkhe ta eendee aa sindhi ;)
[/QUOTE]

Translation : nahin mujhe tou sindhi aati hai.

see i know sindhi too :D

chand_chehra · May 5, 2003, 8:28pm

waah waah very sweet :D

A couplet from Sindhi *vaee*

A couplet from Sindhi vaee