1 choti c nazam

Azam_1 · April 28, 2002, 12:13pm

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Shukar hay tussi mind nai keeta

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atleast aab main yeah Ghazal complete tou kar sakta hoon

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hasil-e-ghazal shair hay …

aag duniya ki lagai hui bujh jaayegi .. koi aansu mere daaman pe bikhar jaane de .. **

I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

Mahee · April 28, 2002, 1:22pm

shuker hai tuci v mind nae keeta

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jagjeet singh ney ye ghazal gae bhi bohat achi hai.

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

MadCon · April 28, 2002, 6:21pm

Verry nice..cute

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I was born with a defective eye

m_isabah · April 28, 2002, 6:54pm

mashallah … nice .. thank you

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To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

Mahee · April 28, 2002, 8:06pm

thanks MadCon and m_isabah jee.

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

_TaNhAyAaN · April 28, 2002, 8:19pm

very nice ghazal!

:~)

~~Khud ko yun mahsur kar baithi hun apni zaat mein
manzilain charon taraf hai rasta koee nahin~~

Mahee · April 29, 2002, 12:48am

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Originally posted by ~TaNhAyAaN~:
**very nice ghazal!

:~)

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thanks tanhayaan jee.

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

Maheen2002 · April 29, 2002, 8:20am

achii nazam hai mahee...

---~---Maria---~---
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

Maheen2002 · April 29, 2002, 8:22am

achii nazam hai mahee jee...

---~---Maria---~---
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

Mahee · April 29, 2002, 12:44pm

thanks alot maheen jee.

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!