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  • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

    Originally posted by IS View Post
    Rukta Bhi Nahi Theek Se,Chalta Bhi Nahi Hai
    Ye Dil Keh Tere Baad,Sanbhalta Bhi Nahi Hai


    Ik Umar Se Hum Uski Tamana Mein Hain Be-Khuwaab
    Wo Chaand Jo Aangan Mein,Utarta Bhi Nahi Hai


    Phir Dil Mein Teri Yaad Ke,Manzar Hain Farozaan
    Aise Mein Koi,Dekhnay Wala Bhi Nahi Hai


    Humrah Bhi Khuwahish Se,Nahi Rehta Hamare
    Aur Baam-e-Rafaqat Se,Utarta Bhi Nahi Hai


    Is Umar Ke Sahra Se,Teri Yaad Ka Badal
    Talta Bhi Nahi Hai,Aur Barasta Bhi Nahi Hai
    Dil ko behlao yeh khilona hi tou hai
    Jab chaha, jis nay chaha toor dia
    Jab chaha, jis nay chaha phir joor dia
    Humaray dil sey dil lagi karnay walo
    Bohut hua yeh tamasha, ab bus karo
    Hum nay ab dil lagana chor dia

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    • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry


      Hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main har kaam karnay main
      zaroori baat kehni ho, koi wada nibhana ho
      isay aawaaz daini ho, usay wapas bulana ho
      hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!
      Madad karni ho uski, yaar ki dharas bundhana ho
      bohut dareena rastoon par kisi say milnay jana ho
      hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!
      Badaltay mausmoon ki sair main dil ko lagana ho
      kisi ko yaad rakhna ho, kisi ko bhool jana ho
      hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!
      Kisi ko maut say pehlay kisi ghum say bachana ho
      haqeeqat aur thee kuch, usko ja kar yeh batana ho
      hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!!
      (Munir Niazi)

      Our Lord, avert from us the punishment of Jahannam (the Hell); indeed, its punishment is a persisting affliction.” (65) Indeed, it is evil as an abode and a place to dwell in (66)

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      • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

        Originally posted by LP View Post
        You write very well
        Thanks. Actually, I am worried about my urdu verse as my total urdu poetry experience is just these last three days.

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        • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

          mian har chooot kay baad sahbalna chata hoon
          mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon


          nahi karta intezar waqat! kesi ka
          mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon


          lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay
          mien un lamhoon ko qaid karna chata hoon


          jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam
          logoo mien ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon


          muj say jitna bhi ho Naraz wo aay dil
          mein usay hameesha khush daikhna chata hoon




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          Imran
          Our Lord, avert from us the punishment of Jahannam (the Hell); indeed, its punishment is a persisting affliction.” (65) Indeed, it is evil as an abode and a place to dwell in (66)

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          • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

            Originally posted by guru8904 View Post
            Thanks. Actually, I am worried about my urdu verse as my total urdu poetry experience is just these last three days.
            Just three days!! you're a natural I suppose
            Life Is Too Short To Wake Up With Regrets.Love the people who treat you right & have compassion for the ones who don't.
            Half of a person's beauty comes from the tongue

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            • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

              I love this poem. Hum dair kr he dete hain
              Originally posted by IS View Post

              Hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main har kaam karnay main
              zaroori baat kehni ho, koi wada nibhana ho
              isay aawaaz daini ho, usay wapas bulana ho
              hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!
              Madad karni ho uski, yaar ki dharas bundhana ho
              bohut dareena rastoon par kisi say milnay jana ho
              hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!
              Badaltay mausmoon ki sair main dil ko lagana ho
              kisi ko yaad rakhna ho, kisi ko bhool jana ho
              hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!
              Kisi ko maut say pehlay kisi ghum say bachana ho
              haqeeqat aur thee kuch, usko ja kar yeh batana ho
              hamaisha dair kar daita hoon main!!
              (Munir Niazi)

              Life Is Too Short To Wake Up With Regrets.Love the people who treat you right & have compassion for the ones who don't.
              Half of a person's beauty comes from the tongue

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              • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                Did you write this?
                Originally posted by IS View Post
                mian har chooot kay baad sahbalna chata hoon
                mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon


                nahi karta intezar waqat! kesi ka
                mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon


                lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay
                mien un lamhoon ko qaid karna chata hoon


                jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam
                logoo mien ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon


                muj say jitna bhi ho Naraz wo aay dil
                mein usay hameesha khush daikhna chata hoon




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                Imran
                Life Is Too Short To Wake Up With Regrets.Love the people who treat you right & have compassion for the ones who don't.
                Half of a person's beauty comes from the tongue

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                • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                  Originally posted by LP View Post
                  Did you write this?
                  yes koi 10 saal pehle
                  Our Lord, avert from us the punishment of Jahannam (the Hell); indeed, its punishment is a persisting affliction.” (65) Indeed, it is evil as an abode and a place to dwell in (66)

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                  • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                    I agree with pktun.
                    Originally posted by pktun View Post
                    You should write blogs of your poems for the record...
                    Try GS blogs...
                    Life Is Too Short To Wake Up With Regrets.Love the people who treat you right & have compassion for the ones who don't.
                    Half of a person's beauty comes from the tongue

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                    • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                      Originally posted by IS View Post
                      yes koi 10 saal pehle
                      Very nice
                      ab Likhte hain?
                      Life Is Too Short To Wake Up With Regrets.Love the people who treat you right & have compassion for the ones who don't.
                      Half of a person's beauty comes from the tongue

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                      • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                        Originally posted by LP View Post
                        Just three days!! you're a natural I suppose
                        Thanks but I think you're over rating me. My problem in urdu I know doesn't have a quick fix solution; it is "limited vocabulary" and I have to live with this handicap.

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                        • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                          Originally posted by LP View Post
                          Very nice
                          ab Likhte hain?
                          Nope I guess I stopped writing after 2010
                          Our Lord, avert from us the punishment of Jahannam (the Hell); indeed, its punishment is a persisting affliction.” (65) Indeed, it is evil as an abode and a place to dwell in (66)

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                          • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                            I stopped writing when I started studying Medicine. Still got some old poems in my diaries.
                            I'm Not The Messiah, I'm A Very Naughty Boy

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                            • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                              Originally posted by guru8904 View Post
                              Thanks but I think you're over rating me. My problem in urdu I know doesn't have a quick fix solution; it is "limited vocabulary" and I have to live with this handicap.
                              No, you don't have to live with it. Exposure to it will fix the problem. My Urdu vocabulary needs work too. I recently read an Urdu book translated in English. Now, I'm re-reading parts of it in Urdu.
                              PS: You really are good.
                              Life Is Too Short To Wake Up With Regrets.Love the people who treat you right & have compassion for the ones who don't.
                              Half of a person's beauty comes from the tongue

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                              • Re: Miscellaneous Poetry

                                Originally posted by NavAhmed View Post
                                I stopped writing when I started studying Medicine. Still got some old poems in my diaries.

                                mai nay student life mai hi thora bohat likhna start kiya tha and professional life mai enter honay k kuch arsay k baad sab likhna bhool gaya
                                Our Lord, avert from us the punishment of Jahannam (the Hell); indeed, its punishment is a persisting affliction.” (65) Indeed, it is evil as an abode and a place to dwell in (66)

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