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  • Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule



    Bait Baazi — Personal Edition is adopting the same flexibility of choice for starting a new sheir as the Bait Bazi in Intikhaab offers. Participants will now be allowed to start a new sheir with either the last letter of the last word or the first letter of the last word. For example, if a sheir ends on word Huwa, the next sheir could be started either with hey aur ye.

    Please keep in mind that it's a modified version of Bait Baazi with a simple difference/condition of poster being the author! Unlike the Intikhaab's Bait Baazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go.

    Thanx
    Amal
    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

  • #2
    Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

    Originally posted by sfaseehrabbani View Post

    ye kaisa dard, ye kaisi kasak si dil meiN hay
    ye teray piaar ki shayad ramaq si dil meiN hay

    ye

    Ye khaab heiN ke saraab heiN ya zindagi ke azaab heiN!
    hum khaahishoN ki dal'daloN meiN doobtey hi chaley gaey


    Gaaf aur Ye
    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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    • #3
      Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

      Guftugu kay qareenay badal say gayee
      Wuh ju rothay tu mosam badal say gayee

      Unki aankhooN ki ik ik ad'aa yaad hay
      Abb zamanay huway woh badal say gayee

      'Gaaf' or 'Yee'
      Hay Ta'aluk Tu Aik Saada Lafz
      Phair Ju Kuch Bhee Hay Nibah Main Hay

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      • #4
        Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

        گھٹتا بڑھتا سایا جیسے
        ساتھ سفر معیں چلتی چپ

        تنہائی کے تیروں جیسی
        دل کے اندر چبھتی چپ



        ghhaT'ta baRhta saya kesay
        sath safar meiN chalti chup

        tanhaai ke teerwN jesi
        dil ke ander chubhti chup

        che or pe

        Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
        mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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        • #5
          Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

          Cheekhti khamoshi ka sannata
          Yehi wehshat tu dil ki ronaq hay


          Hay or Ye
          Last edited by fara; Aug 6th, 2011, 02:37 PM.
          Hay Ta'aluk Tu Aik Saada Lafz
          Phair Ju Kuch Bhee Hay Nibah Main Hay

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          • #6
            Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

            hijr, firaq aur jagtaate
            dil meiN kare basera dard
            aaNkhh rhae khamosh FaSeeH
            raaz rhae ga tera dard


            ہجر، فراق اور جگراتے
            دل میں کرے بسیرا درد
            آنکھ رہے خاموش فصیح
            راز رہے گا تیرا درد


            daal

            Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
            mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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            • #7
              Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule


              Deikhtey rehna ke wo kya sey kya ho jaey ga
              ishq ka jis shakhs ko bhi aarza ho jaey ga
              sochta hoon mey'qashi ka aek aashiq kya mehaz
              masjidoN meiN beitthney sey paarsa ho jaaey ga!

              Gaaf aur Alif
              Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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              • #8
                Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

                go sham mujhay roaz dabo jati hay kekin
                sooraj hooN ufuq per se ubhata hooN hamesha

                گو شام مجھے روز ڈبو جاتی ہے لیکن
                سورج ہوں، افق پر سے ابھرتا ہوں ہمیشہ

                hey
                Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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                • #9
                  Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule


                  Hosh walooN kay labooN per qufl haiN
                  Lafz maa'nee kho chukkay haiN aaj kal
                  Hay Ta'aluk Tu Aik Saada Lafz
                  Phair Ju Kuch Bhee Hay Nibah Main Hay

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                  • #10
                    Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

                    kashtiyaN iss meiN rawaN rehnay do
                    reh na paay ga samundar tanha



                    کشتیاں اس میں رواں رہنے دو
                    رہ نہ پائے گا سمندر تنہا


                    ت یا الف
                    Last edited by sfaseehrabbani; Aug 9th, 2011, 01:00 PM.
                    Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                    mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

                    Comment


                    • #11
                      Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule


                      Aadmi se aadmi ke darmiyaaN
                      faasla hi faasla hey in dinoN
                      har kisi ney roop hey badla huwa
                      rasm kesi ye rawaa hey in dinoN

                      Daal aur Noon
                      Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                      • #12
                        Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

                        Dil ki be qaraari ka kuchh sabab yaqeenan hay
                        mujh ko bhi moHabbat oi ki t^alab yaqeenan hay


                        دل کی بے قراری کا کچھ سبب یقیناً ہے
                        مجھ کو بھی محبت ہی کی طلب یقیناً ہے

                        ہ یا ے

                        Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                        mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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                        • #13
                          Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule


                          Hum ko takney do ye chaand sa roshan chehra
                          apni aaNkhoN sey keh do zara khaamosh raheiN

                          Rey aur Noon
                          Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                          • #14
                            Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule

                            nakaam kaamyaab huay teray ishq meiN
                            ham bujh ke aaftaab huay teray ishq meiN

                            dil ka qaraar luT geya, aaNkhoN ka chen bhi
                            ham Sarf e izt^araab huay teray ishq meiN


                            ناکام کامیاب ہوئے تیرے عشق میں


                            ہم بجھ کے آفتاب ہوئے تیرے عشق میں

                            دل کا قرار لُٹ گیا، آنکھوں کا چین بھی
                            ہم صرفِ اضطراب ہوئے تیرے عشق میں

                            م اور ن

                            Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                            mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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                            • #15
                              Re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition | New Rule


                              Mohabbat sey taraashey khaab aksar toot jaaney par
                              muraadoN ke mazaaroN par wafa ghamgeen rehti hey
                              hazoor-e-maalik-o-maghfoor deti hey duhai par
                              jo poori ho nahi paati, duwa ghamgeen rehti hey

                              Hey aur Ye
                              Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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